London school of economics

CANDIDATE: Suhaani Jain, Indian Citizen

CURRICULUM: IBDP

SCHOOL: Aditya Birla World Academy, Mumbai

SUBJECTS: HL: Economics, Global Politics, Biology | SL: Math AA, English Language & Literature, Spanish B

GRADES: IB Predicted: 40/42

INTERESTED MAJOR: Politics and International Relations

APPROACH

Suhaani came to us with a strong interest in economics and an equally strong track record in debate, MUN, and policy. However, her performance in maths made economics less competitive for admission to highly selective universities. We therefore repositioned her towards politics and international relations, where her profile was both authentic and distinctive. The shift was built on Suhaani’s existing strengths in debate, MUN chairing, and policy advocacy rather than creating a new narrative. Recognising that she was not just a participant but a builder, we helped formalise and scale the NextGen Debaters Championship through institutional partnerships while supporting her leadership at NOSFAM. We also refined her personal narrative by grounding her voice in specific, concrete details, culminating in a memorable essay centred on her encyclopaedic knowledge of women’s artistic gymnastics

JOURNEY

GRADE 9

  • MUN participation. Her first exposure to committee chairing and international relations debate
  • Wonder Girls Academy Fellowship: 75+ hours of leadership training; capstone on social issues
  • Inspirit AI: Introduction to AI and its applications
  • House Captain with responsibilities and school sports participation


GRADE 10

  • IGCSE: 9 A*s across English, Spanish, Global Perspectives, Economics, Physics, Chemistry, Biology, Mathematics, Computer Science — ICE Award with Distinction
  • Continued MUN involvement; growing into chairing roles
  • House Captain & Christmas Market Event Head: led 50+ volunteers, raised $1,200
  • JBMUN 2023 — Honourable Mention (IR & Public Policy)


GRADE 11 & 12

  • Co-Founded NextGen Debaters Championship (in partnership with Melbourne University Debating Society & MAHE Bangalore): 100 students, 25 schools, 14 states; led 60+ volunteers; built 250-member community
  • Founder & Director, NOSFAM Mumbai Chapter (NGO for holistic education & life skills): led team of 35; oversaw 2 flagship festivals reaching 1,100+ students across 22 schools; raised $3,400+; ran literacy, life-skills, and mental health workshops for 250+ children
  • Chair, Co-Chair & Trainer across 25+ MUNs (ABWA & inter-school); authored training guides; mentored delegates to awards at HMUN India & JBMUN; Harvard MUN 2024 — Outstanding Mention
  • Founder, Shantidoot Club (ABWA): mapped UN peacekeeping missions for 57+ students; led conflict, peace & critical thinking workshops
  • Researcher: Youth Diplomacy & Policy under Prof. Madhu Veeraraghavan, Vice Chancellor, MAHE — examining how MUNs simulate policymaking and governance
  • Intern, Aditya Birla Capital & Centrum Broking Ltd: reviewed live credit appraisal memos and equity IPOs; proposed credit redesign; analysed financial ratios, repayment schedules, and policy risk
  • Summer School, Ashoka University Young Scholars Programme (Advanced): policy simulations on data privacy, infrastructure, censorship & inequality
  • Extended Essay (Economics): How SEWA’s micro-savings programmes affect income stability among Ahmedabad’s home-based garment workers — mixed-methods analysis of financial inclusion & women’s economic resilience
  • Horizon Essay: AI’s impact on independent thought, digital amnesia & hybrid intelligence advocacy
  • Harvard High School International Economics Essay: tax reform, inequality, and socioeconomic impact across global contexts
  • Achievements: A* in Global Economics Olympiad, International Finance Olympiad; Aptitude Olympiad Rank 6; Top 350/13,000 teams — Blue Ocean Global Innovation Competition (hybrid menstrual product); 20+ Gold, Silver & Bronze medals across football, athletics, chess & table tennis

THE RED PEN ADVANTAGE

  • Repositioned her application from Economics to Politics and International Relations, making debate, MUN, and policy the centrepiece of her profile.
  • Showcased institutional leadership through NextGen Debaters and NOSFAM, highlighting scale, partnerships, and measurable impact.
  • Built a cohesive policy profile through internships, an Economics Extended Essay on SEWA, Olympiads, and policy simulations linking economics with governance and social impact.
  • Positioned her as a credible young policy thinker through essays, recommendations, MUN leadership, research, and international essay competitions.

OUTCOME

Offers from

London school of economics
University college London
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Ashoka University
University of St Andrews
The university of Melbourne
new york university

CANDIDATE:  
AN

GRE/GMAT:
Did not take

GPA:
3.43/4.0 (as per her WES evaluation)

Qualification:
BA Economics

Work Experience:
Less than six months

Admitted to:
NYU

Background

AN aimed for an MS in Marketing in the US and the UK. The applicant was prompt in balancing the WES evaluation and other application components. However, while brainstorming the SOP we encountered a challenge. The applicant lacked sufficient work experience, which is gained through internships. They only had a two-month marketing internship in a finance company. However, as an undergraduate, the applicant was editor-in-chief of the college magazine, co-authored academic papers and hosted an Instagram series on mental health, diversity, and the LGBTQ+ community.

Approach

While storyboarding, we strategically guided the applicant to match their academic endeavours with their desire to become an inclusive impact marketer. As an editor, writer and social media content creator for diversity and inclusivity, AN developed excellent communication skills, an understanding of different people, and concise and compelling storytelling abilities. We advised the applicant to position themself as a collaborative marketing person who understood diverse needs, has problem-solving skills and was familiar with contemporary communication platforms.

Key Takeaway

AN exemplifies how storyboarding with expert counsellors can help applicants identify experiences that align with their goals. Our strategic advice proved valuable, and the applicant received offers from programmes of their choice. It reinforced the fact that transferable skills, like problem-solving, communication, collaboration and technical proficiency, are greatly valued and can compensate for work experience.